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Re: गजल एक कोशीस
« Reply #30 on: June 05, 2009, 09:06:41 PM »
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Re: गजल एक कोशीस
« Reply #31 on: June 09, 2009, 06:26:42 AM »
कस्तो हुन्थ्यो बर्षातको झरी बनी झर्न पाए
ओइलाएको यो जिन्दगी बसन्तमा सर्न पाए

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Re: गजल एक कोशीस
« Reply #32 on: June 09, 2009, 07:12:59 AM »
wow didi nice one hope to see more.......
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Re: गजल एक कोशीस
« Reply #33 on: June 09, 2009, 08:14:53 AM »
toee ta, achel flex G ko Kabita aauna chatakkai chhodyo ni :p

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Re: गजल एक कोशीस
« Reply #34 on: June 09, 2009, 08:20:02 AM »
kina tyasto ni feri?

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« Reply #35 on: June 09, 2009, 08:20:55 AM »
Tyastai Tyastai kasto Bhayera hola ni hou aani
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Re: गजल एक कोशीस
« Reply #36 on: June 09, 2009, 08:25:50 AM »
कस्तो हुन्थ्यो फ्लेक्स जि को एउटा गजल सुन्न पाए
शब्द शब्द मनै भरि माला जस्तै उन्न पाए !!!

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Re: गजल एक कोशीस
« Reply #37 on: June 09, 2009, 08:28:13 AM »
aaucha aaucha Jhattai  Chinta nagares :)
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Re: गजल एक कोशीस
« Reply #38 on: June 09, 2009, 02:34:38 PM »
kasto hunthyo flexface le vane jastai huna paaye
sansaarako chhaano sagarmaathalai udi chhun paaye
You want but you compromise, thatís life.
You want & you wait & you donít compromise
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Re: गजल एक कोशीस
« Reply #39 on: June 09, 2009, 05:41:18 PM »
toee ta maya  :Laughing:

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Re: गजल एक कोशीस
« Reply #40 on: June 09, 2009, 09:09:17 PM »
hoina ho kali, malai chai kina kabita nafureko bai. malai ni yeso dui char ota formula sikaunu na ho. ma ta sarai pare ni
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Re: गजल एक कोशीस
« Reply #41 on: June 09, 2009, 09:13:57 PM »
lau feri tyahi Gunaaso yo YaD Ko :laukha:

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Re: गजल एक कोशीस
« Reply #42 on: June 09, 2009, 09:17:18 PM »
hahaha najanesi kasko ke lagyo ta. pittai rurya haina, maile k garum?
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Re: गजल एक कोशीस
« Reply #43 on: June 09, 2009, 09:21:43 PM »
sikaaunu ta nahuney ho, tara maile lekhirako kabita thiyo. timilai bhanera maatra sikaayeko hai ta :StickingTongueOut:

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दिलमा एउटा चोट पर्नु पर्छ रे
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आफ्नो आँखाबाट पहिले आँशु झर्नु पर्छ रे
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यो मनमा गहिरो चोट पार्नुछ
एक धर्सो कबिता कोरिसके पछि
प्याज काटेर भा पनि आँशु झार्नु छ ।

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Re: गजल एक कोशीस
« Reply #44 on: June 09, 2009, 09:25:57 PM »
eieieieieiei, aba morne bhaye ma pani lau hai kali. aba ta ati bho ma ni try garnu paryo
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