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Re: गजल एक कोशीस
« Reply #300 on: February 06, 2012, 01:00:26 PM »
आकासको म जुन अनि तारा गन्दैछु
कति रैछ मङ्गल बृह्स सारा गन्दैछु

ऊ बोक्सी ऊ डाइ भन्दै गाउ तिर
ढ्यांग्रो ठटाइ हिडने को पारा गन्दै छु

ठुलो बडा महाजन को मात्र हुकुम चल्ने?
कहाँ रैछ संबिधान को धारा गन्दै छु

प्यारो हाम्रो मातृभुमी बेचिन्दा अचेल
जोगाउन एकजुट को नारा गन्दैछु

घुसखोरी मन परि गर्ने हरु लाई
भत्क़ाऊन सोसित सर्ब-हारा गन्दैछु
याद आयो भने आँखा बन्द नगर्नू,
भेट भएन भने पनि दु:ख नमान्नू,
हामी सधैँ सँगै हुनुपर्छ भन्ने केही छैन,
तर मित्रताको ढोका भने कहिले बन्द नगर्नू ।

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Re: गजल एक कोशीस
« Reply #301 on: February 07, 2012, 07:27:11 PM »
NICE ONE BIMALM KEEP IT UP! :pani
When I see you smile and know that it is not for me, that is when I will miss you the most.

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Re: गजल एक कोशीस
« Reply #302 on: February 08, 2012, 04:03:16 AM »
wow

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Re: गजल एक कोशीस
« Reply #303 on: February 09, 2012, 03:49:51 PM »
wow wow sewadhog
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Re: गजल एक कोशीस
« Reply #304 on: February 22, 2012, 03:04:25 PM »
अनायासै बेदना मा बारम्बार जल्दै छु म
अचुक अँधेरी सुनसान मा बल्दै छु म
सारंगी को तार झैं मन को तार रेटी रंहे.
प्रती बिम्ब छल्न नसकी मिर्तु स्थल मा ढल्दै छु म.,.....P
याद आयो भने आँखा बन्द नगर्नू,
भेट भएन भने पनि दु:ख नमान्नू,
हामी सधैँ सँगै हुनुपर्छ भन्ने केही छैन,
तर मित्रताको ढोका भने कहिले बन्द नगर्नू ।

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Re: गजल एक कोशीस
« Reply #305 on: February 24, 2012, 02:20:17 AM »
harey raam harey raam :D

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Re: गजल एक कोशीस
« Reply #306 on: May 08, 2012, 08:18:18 AM »
maile timlai haneko guf hijo jasto lagcha.
timle pani thapeko sahi hijo jasto lagcha

timi tala mathi ma chadda kheri ukalo ma
timle mero chateko dimag hijo jasto lagcha..
Having clock doesn't mean the time is yours.

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Re: गजल एक कोशीस
« Reply #307 on: May 08, 2012, 08:51:43 AM »
maile timlai haneko guf hijo jasto lagcha.
timle pani thapeko sahi hijo jasto lagcha

timi tala mathi ma chadda kheri ukalo ma
timle mero chateko dimag hijo jasto lagcha..

HORA BHANEKO RUPESH BHAI !
 :pani :pani :pani :pani :pani :pani
When I see you smile and know that it is not for me, that is when I will miss you the most.

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Re: गजल एक कोशीस
« Reply #308 on: May 09, 2012, 08:44:10 AM »
harey raam harey raam :D
raam naam satya ho
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Re: गजल एक कोशीस
« Reply #309 on: May 09, 2012, 11:31:11 AM »
wah wah
You want but you compromise, that’s life.
You want & you wait & you don’t compromise
THAT IS LOVE

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Re: गजल एक कोशीस
« Reply #310 on: May 13, 2012, 02:28:58 PM »
 :good:
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Re: गजल एक कोशीस
« Reply #311 on: May 28, 2012, 04:43:32 AM »
wow wonderful... nice to see all these topics alive after a long long time.....!!!

thank you so much...  :pani
रातो त्‍यो पछेउरीको छेवैले,......पुछ्दैछौ कि भिजेका ति परेली हरु,
सम्हालेर राखिदेउ ति थोपाहरु,...खुशी बनाई फर्काईदिउंला बाचा भो बरु,


LoOkInG FoR Me..? ??? DiN'T FiNd aNyWhErE..??.. LoOk At YoUr HeaRt... U wIlL FiNd mE tHeRe.. innit..!!

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Re: गजल एक कोशीस
« Reply #312 on: May 30, 2012, 02:09:10 AM »
अहोहोहोहो आज कता हो आईस आईस जस्तो मुन्छे देख्दैछु हौ यो चौतारीमा  :pani

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Re: गजल एक कोशीस
« Reply #313 on: June 15, 2012, 08:42:00 AM »
rupesh bhai feri gajal liyera aayo
fateko tyo euta man siyera aayo.

bachdaina bhanthe sabai ista mitra haru
dherai din pachi aaja jiyera aayo.

ramailo cha jindagi bhanda bhandai sathi haru
malai thaha cha kati aansu piyera aayo

baira bata herda ajhai ma tuteko chaina
bhitra bhitrai mutu kati khiyera aayo...
Having clock doesn't mean the time is yours.

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Re: गजल एक कोशीस
« Reply #314 on: June 16, 2012, 07:47:11 PM »
GOOD ONE RUPESHA BHAI! :pani
When I see you smile and know that it is not for me, that is when I will miss you the most.

 


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