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>>>>गजल<<<<
« on: December 27, 2012, 02:09:06 AM »


हरसाँझ बोतलहरु रित्तिदैछन अचेल
प्यास जवानीको मेटिदैछन अचेल

पिउछु बेहोशीमै डुब्छु म नशामा
जिउने रहरहरु रेटिदैछन अचेल

जति हिड्दै जान्छु गोरेटो जिवनको
मान्छे नाना-थरि भेटिदैछन अचेल

उ भन्थ्यो म सुन्थे प्रीतका कथाहरु
स्मृतिका पन्नाहरु च्यातिदैछन अचेल । ।


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Re: >>>>गजल<<<<
« Reply #1 on: December 28, 2012, 09:42:23 AM »
आज अचानक किन फोरममा जाउँ जाउँ लाग्यो भनेको त कालीको गजलले तानेको पो रैछ।
असम्भब छ जिन्दगी, जिउने कुनै रहर देउ
मृत्यु बरु सहिदिन्छु, अञ्जुलीमा जहर देउ ।

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Re: >>>>गजल<<<<
« Reply #2 on: December 28, 2012, 02:25:50 PM »
Hola hai ;) gazal tyo ni bottle ko :p maile piuna suru garesi Lekhna suru gareko gazal rupi pazzal ho najukkkinu hola ;)

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Re: >>>>गजल<<<<
« Reply #3 on: December 28, 2012, 07:55:32 PM »
KHOI AAFULAI TA BOTTLE MAN PARDAINA RE K :pani
When I see you smile and know that it is not for me, that is when I will miss you the most.

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Re: >>>>गजल<<<<
« Reply #4 on: December 28, 2012, 11:30:33 PM »
Ye napiuneharu ho piyera ta hera yeha piuna kati gahro cha :p

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Re: >>>>गजल<<<<
« Reply #5 on: December 30, 2012, 06:55:28 AM »
PIYERA PANI HERI SAKEYN . :pani
When I see you smile and know that it is not for me, that is when I will miss you the most.

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Re: >>>>गजल<<<<
« Reply #6 on: December 30, 2012, 12:51:18 PM »
Lau ho ra

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Re: >>>>गजल<<<<
« Reply #7 on: December 30, 2012, 07:56:46 PM »
TESAILE TA BHANEKO NI :pani
When I see you smile and know that it is not for me, that is when I will miss you the most.

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Re: >>>>गजल<<<<
« Reply #8 on: January 12, 2013, 07:32:22 AM »

खै के भको के भको हो यो
केटीहरु केटा हुदैछन् केटाहरु केटीदैछन् अचेल्


काली तिम्लाई सपनामा देख्नै छोडें
यस्तो अचम्म भो काली तिमि सेतिदैछौ अचेल् :bow:
The Sound Of Silence

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Re: >>>>गजल<<<<
« Reply #9 on: January 16, 2013, 07:03:14 PM »
nice poem
You want but you compromise, that’s life.
You want & you wait & you don’t compromise
THAT IS LOVE

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Re: >>>>गजल<<<<
« Reply #10 on: January 17, 2013, 04:11:29 AM »
Gazal nahi puzzle hain;)

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Re: >>>>गजल<<<<
« Reply #11 on: January 18, 2013, 02:42:42 AM »
really
You want but you compromise, that’s life.
You want & you wait & you don’t compromise
THAT IS LOVE

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Re: >>>>गजल<<<<
« Reply #12 on: January 23, 2013, 03:02:06 AM »
yeah Sisi

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Re: >>>>गजल<<<<
« Reply #13 on: February 19, 2013, 12:59:49 AM »
aaba,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, forum ko queen le pani yeti gazal,, lekhna sakina bhanne ta,,,,,,,,,,,,,
aru ko ta jhan kurai nagarm hai,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,afu ta budesh kall lagyo dimag pani sakiyo
kehi din matrai baki xa jiban ko amulya pall jeuna  kasaiko yaad ma dherai piyo
aaba ta ,,, bottle le afailai bharna po lagyo achel , hehehehehe
Someday you'll cry for me,,,Like i cried for you
Someday you'll miss me,,,,,  Like i missed you
Someday you'll need me ,,,,, Like i needed you
Someday you'll love me,,, But i wont love you

 


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